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The response: Meaning Provides a thoughtful interpretation of the critical lens by explaining how if conditions ... had been

different, then the outcomes faced by the individuals could've changed. The response uses the criteria to make a clear and reasoned analysis of The Crucible and Fahrenheit 451 (people like Montag and Proctor find themselves at the mercy of a law system and Neither of them chose to be born into 1600's America or a future where reading is forbidden).

Development Develops ideas clearly and consistently, with reference to relevant and specific evidence from both texts through a discussion of setting (the fictional future of "Fahrenheit 451" and the former's 1600's society of religious zealots), symbolism (any non-conformists they symbolize), and conflict (are up against another man, a society, or an entirely different force) to illustrate how people cannot avoid being steered in a certain direction.

Organization Maintains the focus on the idea that nonconformists can try, and do, but they will never avoid societal control. The response exhibits a logical sequence of ideas beginning with a generalized interpretation of the critical lens, then identifying the events that characters from each work are born into, and explaining how they are at the mercy of the laws and people that support these events. Appropriate transitions are used (One simple philosophy which answers this question and "Fahrenheit 451" has this as well).

Language Use Uses language that is fluent and original (Many literary works involve a conflict of a person against a larger body intolerant of nonconformity), although occasionally awkward (law system and each's), with evident awareness of audience and purpose (there has been debate on how our lives are taken in the direction they are). The response varies structure and length of sentences to control rhythm and pacing (This tells not why these events can control men or who is the cause of them; it only tells what it is that has made us do as we have always done as a species).

Conventions Demonstrates control of the conventions, exhibiting occasional errors in punctuation ("The Crucible," this and like Guy Montag have found) only when using sophisticated language.

Conclusion: Overall, the response best fits the criteria for Level 5 in all qualities.

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earnest so(' (de_ au lir -nne,hj aNt="600) q on

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Question 28 — Practice Paper — C

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Comp. Eng. — June '11 [75]

Anchor Paper — Question 28 — Level 5 — A

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Anchor Paper — Question 28 — Level 5 — C

J.W . von CioufhL onoz, said iha,-1- "No two pQr(sonks ni_9ard thQ, vvoH d in uac -Hy -thQ sorn(Ld raoplk, come, from a varwk/ of dif-PLictn+ back ► culfurts, valvu and efLin9 if is nor irr)poLsibUL for any -Hy° pLopa, +o ViZN --Fht world ju(s-f on anolher.

Thisi bihaviord• arid chctrasc-turOto of h umans can noi any ■Nifnus6u)

rik,a,1 ii -ft but in I iiurci -fUlli as vvui I . whin &oz,ihks wrote -that "No iwo

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ship rno■,-i- U and craw Trey (sail the, &ciads in on uf-farf io find Moby

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Anchor Paper — Question 28 — Level 5 — C

Ahab ZA -tirna I con-f h the, ohoit clan oft-th his ► n-firnai con-ilicf within hi M3Lif, as +rt'iLs to oVivcomi in 1,s ► nAcurtiLus by sta,in9 itVue)(9u on Mobv Di c K .

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+ho.d- hold strong vans what ihur views and ort)

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Valves ctrl , in-frodooLd to w very \joun Oifftrurt -Eorni (LIU

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Question 28 — Practice Paper — B

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Question 28 — Practice Paper — B

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